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Step 2

                      -  Number the items according to the controlling idea. 1) Economic problems
                         2) Environmental problems

                       1) Migration is the only alternative to get a lot of money and survive in the life.

                       Idiomatic problems are the major reason that people emigrate to other country.


                       1) An extreme poverty is another reason of Migration.
                       2) Personal insecurity is one of the most popular reasons to migrate.

                       Now a days political problems cause Migration in different countries.

                       2) People migrate for environmental problems for example pollution, natural
                         disasters etc.; that happen in their native countries.

                       Religion problems can produce migration.

                       2) People hope with a better lifestyle.

                       1) People dreams with new perspectives in their lives.
                       1) Better opportunities to found good jobs and more economic stability.


                  Step 3

                      -  Cluster for each supporting point.




                                          One alternative to get a                         There are more

                                          lot of money is work in                       opportunities to work
                                            other countries with                             with a better
                                         better economic situation.                         remuneration.





                                                                                       There are a lot of families
                                           Extreme poverty is the
         Economic                        principal effect that some                     with bad economy and

         problems                                                                      this problem can produce
                                           countries have in for a
                                           bad economic system.                        more problems in a social
                                                                                                 way.






                                          A better lifestyle is the                     Live without concerns
                                          principal dreams that all                   about money, basic needs
                                             the people have.                               and bad jobs.
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