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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA DE AMBATO
                                                 CARRERA DE IDIOMAS
                  NAME: Omar Rubio                                         LEVEL: Fourth
                                   th
                  DATE: October 6 , 2017
                  Instruction:
                  Write a three level paragraph about a social group. Follow the steps.
                         STEP 1: Brainstorming
                  Che Guevara                                              War
                  Socialism                                                Equality
                  Cuba                                                     Argentina
                  Songs                                                    Posters
                         STEP 2: Topic sentence
                  The commandant Che Guevara is considered as a role model for some people.
                         STEP 3: Outline
                         The commandant Che Guevara is considered a role model to some people for
                  several reasons.
                                I.     He had courage
                                       a.  He fought for his believes
                                       b.  He had difficulties
                                II.    He belong to the people
                                       a.  He was poor
                                       b.  Social needs
                                III.   Known worldwide
                                       a.  Posters
                                       b.  Songs

                         STEP 4: First draft
                         The commandant Che Guevara is considered like a role model to some people for
                  several reasons. Firstly, he had courage, because he followed his believes. He fought for
                  them, and never gave up. All his life he had difficulties, but he overcame them. Secondly,
                  he was a people’s person, because he was a person from town, and he was poor. Finally,
                  Che Guevara for all the things he did, he became all worldwide known, but most in Latin
                  America. You actually can see a lot of merchandise of him, like posters, pins, T-shirts,
                  mugs, to name a few. Another way that Che Guevara became popular are the songs that
                  were made in his honor. Everyone has ever heard on of these even though they are not
                  socialists. For all these reasons Che Guevara has become a role model.
                         STEP 5: Final draft
                         The commandant Che Guevara is considered like a role model to some people for
                  several reasons. Firstly, he had courage, because he followed his believes and his values.
                  He fought for them, and never gave up. All his life he had difficulties, but he overcame
                  them. Secondly, he was a people’s person, because he was a person from town, and he and
                  his family were poor. Living this way made him concern about all the social needs his
                  neighbors had. Finally, Che Guevara for all the things he did, he became all worldwide
                  known, but most in Latin America. You actually can see a lot of merchandise of him, like
                  posters, pins, T-shirts, mugs, to name a few. Another way that Che Guevara became
                  popular are the songs that were made in his honor. Everyone has ever heard on of these
                  even though they are not socialists. For all these reasons Che Guevara has become a
                  role model.


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