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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA DE AMBATO
CARRERA DE IDIOMAS
NAME: Omar Rubio LEVEL: Fourth
th
DATE: October 6 , 2017
Instruction:
Write a three level paragraph about a social group. Follow the steps.
STEP 1: Brainstorming
Che Guevara War
Socialism Equality
Cuba Argentina
Songs Posters
STEP 2: Topic sentence
The commandant Che Guevara is considered as a role model for some people.
STEP 3: Outline
The commandant Che Guevara is considered a role model to some people for
several reasons.
I. He had courage
a. He fought for his believes
b. He had difficulties
II. He belong to the people
a. He was poor
b. Social needs
III. Known worldwide
a. Posters
b. Songs

STEP 4: First draft
The commandant Che Guevara is considered like a role model to some people for
several reasons. Firstly, he had courage, because he followed his believes. He fought for
them, and never gave up. All his life he had difficulties, but he overcame them. Secondly,
he was a people’s person, because he was a person from town, and he was poor. Finally,
Che Guevara for all the things he did, he became all worldwide known, but most in Latin
America. You actually can see a lot of merchandise of him, like posters, pins, T-shirts,
mugs, to name a few. Another way that Che Guevara became popular are the songs that
were made in his honor. Everyone has ever heard on of these even though they are not
socialists. For all these reasons Che Guevara has become a role model.
STEP 5: Final draft
The commandant Che Guevara is considered like a role model to some people for
several reasons. Firstly, he had courage, because he followed his believes and his values.
He fought for them, and never gave up. All his life he had difficulties, but he overcame
them. Secondly, he was a people’s person, because he was a person from town, and he and
his family were poor. Living this way made him concern about all the social needs his
neighbors had. Finally, Che Guevara for all the things he did, he became all worldwide
known, but most in Latin America. You actually can see a lot of merchandise of him, like
posters, pins, T-shirts, mugs, to name a few. Another way that Che Guevara became
popular are the songs that were made in his honor. Everyone has ever heard on of these
even though they are not socialists. For all these reasons Che Guevara has become a
role model.

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