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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA DE AMBATO
CARRERA DE IDIOMAS
NAME: Omar Rubio LEVEL: Fourth
th
DATE: October 20 , 2017
WRITING II
Instruction:
Write a division essay about (topic # 1). Follow the writing steps suggested in your book.
STEP 1: Draft a topic sentence
As an Ecuadorian, I have three main characteristics that makes me unique.
STEP 2: Development
Rich history
 Indigenous people
 Spanish people
 Mix of races
Family
 Variety of personalities
 Family tree
 Define personality

Activities
 Festivals
 Gatherings
 Seasonal festivities

STEP 3: Outline
As Ecuadorian, I have three main characteristics that makes me unique.
IV. We have a very rich history
a. We came from indigenous people
b. We came from Spanish people
c. We are a mixture of races
V. Family background
a. Variety of personalities
b. Family connections
c. Define personality
VI. Personal and shared activities
a. Different kinds of festivals
b. Social gatherings
c. Seasonal festivities

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