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C.  They appreciate their families.
                      D.  Parents teach values in their home.
                 VI.   Education is important in Ecuador
                      C.  The culture in this country is important.
                      D.  Young people learn traditional things.

              Step 4.- Write the essay

                                 ¨ Different aspects of the Ecuador culture¨
                    Many  countries  around  the  world  have  different  cultures  and  these  cultures  are
              characteristics that define at each country and Ecuador has it is own characteristics and these
              things create a beautiful place for live or visit.                        Comentado [ET1]: Introduction
                    First, one enduring aspect of the cultures of Ecuador is the important of the Family.   Comentado [ET2]: Transition
              Traditional, people received all their education from their parents and grandparents. The
              family is still a vital social unit. For example, in Ecuador many people prefer to spend time   Comentado [ET3]: Transition
              with their families that work in other thing.
                    Education  is  another  important  aspect  in  Ecuador.  The  parents  in  the  country  of   Comentado [ET4]: Transition
              Ecuador are concerned about teaching good values to their children. This is a  habit that
              parents practice because it is very important for society because it is a characteristic that
              identifies us. Values are the foundations of a good society and Ecuador is characterized by
              having good values. For example, humility, work, effort, forgiveness, are some of the reasons   Comentado [ET5]: Transition
              why the people of Ecuador are characterized.
                    Another  important  aspect  in  Ecuador  is  the  traditional  festivities  that  Ecuador   Comentado [ET6]: Transition
              celebrates. In addition, the different cities of this country have different festivities that people   Comentado [ET7]: Transition
              and tourists can enjoy. For example, the city of Ambato is well known for celebrating The   Comentado [ET8]: Transition
              Feast of Flowers and Fruits. Celebrate your holidays are something that identifies this country
              very much because in this way you can show your culture, beliefs, gastronomy, customs, etc.   Comentado [ET9]: Body
                    In  conclusion, the different cultural aspects of Ecuador  make this country a  very   Comentado [ET10]: Transition
              beautiful place to live and for tourists to get to know it, to learn from this culture. I think
              Ecuador is a great country with a great culture.                          Comentado [ET11]: Introduction


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              Conclusion: Opinion
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