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Argumentative Essay- Correction
Name: Gissela Sarsoza

Topic: Should a college or university education be tuition free?

Step 1: Define key terms and limit the topic.

Defining: What does tuition mean?
Tuition is the payment that someone gives in order to be part of an educational institution;

this amount can differ according to the recognition or the category of certain institution.

Limiting: what is tuition used for?
It is used to pay the basic needs of an institution such as the water, the electricity, the

Internet or the phone but also to make profit that benefits the investors of the establishment.
Limiting: In Ecuador, what institutions do work with tuition?

In Ecuador, most of public universities are free, but private universities have different
tuitions as requirement to enter.

Limiting: If tuition is allowed, how much would this be expected to cost?

I think that there are tuitions that are really expensive like $4.000 or more per semester so I
believe that tuitions should be more affordable like $500 to $1.000.

Step 2: Identify 2 opposing opinions.
Should a college or university education be tuition free?

YES NO
Tuition free gives the low-income students If tuition is free, it will be hard to pay the
the opportunity to study. basic needs and the employees.
It promotes the equality in education. Through the taxes, tuition helps the economy
of the country.
Because of the great number of students, the
government makes the efforts to do a better
public and free education.

Step 3: Outline

Thesis statement: Tuition should be free because it gives the low income-students the
opportunity to study, it promotes equality in education and it helps free education to
improve.

I. It gives low-income students the opportunity to study.

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