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The pollution around the word

The pollution around the word is caused because of various facts, but I am going to talk

about the three most important facts: Pollution the affects water, products that pollute,
felling of tree. First, the Pollution the affects water [is caused by the workers of

enterprise or industries that make things or food, since they throw the waste to the

rivers. I think that the manage should throe the waste in the established places and that
they don’t contaminated.] Second, there are more products that pollute the word. [The

deodorant is a product that not only pollutes, but also destroys the atmosphere. Also the

bad use of electricity has that the atmosphere it deteriorate.] Finally, the chopping of
trees it’s something that happens in all the word.[ I think that the president should plant

two trees per each chopped tree.] In conclusion, the pollution is a fact that affects us and
with the passed from time it will affect much more.

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