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FIRST DRAFT.
My high.school teacher, Verónica Chiluisa, as my role model.
I admired my high-school teacher, because of her creativity, dedication, and exigency in
classes, First, she showed creativity developing her work. She as a teacher was
always creating activities or extra material to make a funny class and not to get her
students bored. When she presented a class she started with any game or song. For
example, she gave us cards with vocabulary and pictures to math them. Another
important point, she was dedicated and level-headed. Each student could realize that
she always dedicated her time for her students and for her studies. She was a teacher at
the same time a student, and everyone said also that she was smart, because of her
knowledge. For instance, when her computer or projector didn’t work, she settled it by
her own Knowledge. So, she knew about everything. Finally, she was very exigent
teacher. Verónica was always demanding us to work hard because she considered that
it is the best way to get good results and knowledge. For example, she always sent us
homework and she checked them one by one. It was not for waste time but, for makes
us to learn and do homework by ourselves. If we didn’t do it, we got a zero easily.
Identify topic sentence, controlling idea, general statements, transitions,
linkers, explanation.
My high-school teacher, Verónica Chiluisa, as my role model.
I admired my high-school teacher, because of her creativity, dedication, and exigency in
classes. First, she showed creativity developing her work. She as a teacher was
always creating activities or extra material to make a funny class and not to get her
students bored. When she presented a class she started with any game or song. For
example, she gave us cards with vocabulary and pictures to math them. Another
important point, she was dedicated and level-headed. Each student could realize that
she always dedicated her time for her students and for her studies. She was a teacher at
the same time a student, and everyone said also that she was smart, because of her
knowledge. For instance, when her computer or projector didn’t work, she settled it by
her own knowledge. So, she knew about everything. Finally, she was very exigent
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