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teacher. Verónica was always demanding us to work hard because she considered that

it is the best way to get good results and knowledge. For example, she always sent us
homework and she checked them one by one. It was not for waste time but, for makes

us to learn and do homework by ourselves. If we didn’t do it, we got a zero easily.

 Closing sentence

I admired and I have her as my role model because of all of his great qualities and her

attitude. Thanks her each student was more responsible with homework and quizzes. I
learn a lot from her, her strategies used in class help me to be more creative to enjoy

what I was doing.

 IDENTIFY THE TYPE OF CLOSING SENTENCE.

Refers back to the controlling idea/ major supporting points with some words forms or

synonyms.

 FINAL DRAFT.

My high-school teacher, Verónica Chiluisa, as my role model.

I admired my high-school teacher, because of her creativity, dedication, and exigency in

classes. First, she showed creativity developing her work. She as a teacher was

always creating activities or extra material to make a funny class and not to get her
students bored. When she presented a class she started with any game or song. For

example, she gave us cards with vocabulary and pictures to math them. Another
important point, she was dedicated and level-headed. Each student could realize that

she always dedicated her time for her students and for her studies. She was a teacher at

the same time a student, and everyone said also that she was smart, because of her
knowledge. For instance, when her computer or projector didn’t work, she settled it by

her own knowledge. So, she knew about everything. Finally, she was very exigent
teacher. Verónica was always demanding us to work hard because she considered that

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