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CORRECTION
Migration (the movement of people from one place to another), is part of globalization.
Write about the reasons that people migrate in today’s world.
WRIRING PROCESS:
STEP 1: Make a list
There are not too much sources of employment.
To study in other countries.
They need money to keep their families stable.
They don’t have a home.
They want a better salary.
The salary they receive is not enough.
The increase in delinquency.
DRAFT TESIS STATEMENT:
Over the last years the world has experienced a big social problem, which is migration.
This situation has as principal reasons the economic situation of the countries and the
possibility to find advanced level studies.
STEP 2: Cross out items that do not relate to the supporting points.
There are not too much sources of employment. (1)
To study in other countries. (2)
They need money to keep their families stable.
They don’t have a home. (1)
They want a better salary. (2)
The salary they receive is not enough. (1)
The increase in delinquency.
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