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Write a three level paragraph about a social group or culture.
Follow the steps:

1. Brainstorming

2. Draft a topic sentence
3. Make an outline

4. First draft ( topic sentence_ / general statement / concluding sentence
5. Final draft ( improved topic sentence / add transitions conjunctions / improved

general statements / details () / concluding sentence

Step 1

Courageous

 He was brave and fought against the opposition.
 He fought against racial discrimination.

 He wanted to have a country with the same rights and obligations.

Peaceful

 He spent 27 years in jail but he didn’t hate people for this event.
 He didn’t report white people from his country.

 He won the Nobel Prize of peace.

Intelligent man

 He knew how to lead a country.

 He could manage people in the way he talked.
 He wanted that the minority had a good education.

 “Education is the most powerful weapon which you can change the world.”

Step 2
Nelson Mandela was an ex leader of South Africa, and he is my role model because he can

taught the whole world how to lead a country with courageous, peace and intelligence.

Step 3
Nelson Mandela was an ex leader of South Africa, and he is my role model because he can

taught the whole world how to lead a country with courageous, peace and intelligence.
I. He was a courageous man,
a. He fought against racial discrimination in Africa.

b. He wanted to have an equal world where white and black people have the same
rights and the same value.

II. Mandela was a kind man.

a. He spent 27 years in jail, but he didn’t hate anyone for this reason.

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