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b. When he was president he didn’t report with people from his country.
c. He won the Nobel Prize of peace.

III. He led his country with intelligence.

a. He could manage people for the way he speech.
b. He wanted that the minority go to school.

c. “Education is the most powerful weapon which you can change the world.”

Step 4

Nelson Mandela was an ex leader of South Africa. He is my role model because he can
taught the whole world how to lead a country with courageous, peace and intelligence.

Mandela was a courageous man. He fought against racial discrimination in South Africa. (He

wanted to have an equal world where white and black people have the same rights and the
same value.) Mandela was a gentile and peaceful man. (He spent 27 years in jail, but he

didn’t hate anyone for this painful event in his life. When he was president he didn’t report

with people from his country. Also, he won the Nobel Prize of peace. Mandela led his
country with intelligence.) He could manage people for the way he speech. (He wanted that

the minority go to school, and he said “Education is the most powerful weapon which you
can change the world.”) To conclude, Mandela was a revolutionary, intelligent and humbles

man who led his country with all the necessary weapons to make this world better.
Step 5

Nelson Mandela was an ex leader of South Africa who wanted to have a better world to live.

He is my role model because he can taught the whole world how to lead a country without
pride or hate just with courageous, peace and intelligence I admire Mandela for three reasons.

First, Mandela was a courageous man who fought for rights of black people. He fought
against racial discrimination in South Africa because he wanted to have an equal world where

white and black people have the same rights and the same value. Second, Mandela was a
gentile and a peaceful man. (He spent 27 years in jail, but he didn’t hate anyone for this

painful event in his life. Also, when he was president he didn’t report with people from his

country because he thought that all people had the same value. Furthermore, he won the
Nobel Prize of peace because he had an impeccable behavior not just as president also, for his

humility, forgiveness and for his intelligence behavior.) Third, Mandela led his country with

intelligence. (He could manage people for the way he speech. Additionally, He wanted that
the minority go to school, and he said “Education is the most powerful weapon which you

can change the world.”) To conclude, I think that Mandela was a revolutionary, intelligent
and humbles man who led his country with all the necessary weapons to make this world

better.

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