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2.- Topic Sentence:
The social group that I consider my role model is “Rokers group” because of their

appearance, preferences, and personality.

3.- Make an outline:

T.S: The social group that I consider my role model is “Rockers group” because of their appearance,
preferences, and personality.
G.S 1: I like their appearance.

Detail: They wear black clothes.

Detail: They have long hair.

Detail: They like tattoos and piercings.

G.S 2: My preferences are the same.

Detail: They like Rock, and Metal music.
Detail: They like to learn about new cultures.

Detail: They want to try new things.

G.S 3: I like the way that they are.

Detail: They are good speakers, interesting topics.

Detail: They are relaxing people.
Detail: They like brave and love to take risk.

C.S: Rockers, as a role model, are the strongest influence in my life.

4.- First draft:
MY ROLE MODEL

The social group that I consider my role model is “Rockers group” because of their

appearance, preferences, and personality. I have always loved their appearance. I love black clothes
and have long hair. We like tattoos and piercings. They taught me their preferences and I like them a

lot. Rock and Heavy Metal became my favorite kind of music. Rockers like to learn about new

cultures and sub-cultures around the world. They like to try new things and acquire knowledge of
these experience. I like their amazing personalities. Rockers always have an interesting topic to talk

about. They are so relaxed. Rockers are peaceful, and like to help people. They are brave and always

want to take risks. In conclusion, Rockers, as a role model, are the strongest influence in my life.