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5.- Final draft:
MY ROLE MODEL
The social group that I consider my role model is “Rockers group” because of their
appearance, preferences, and personality. First, since I was a child I have always loved their
appearance. [I love wearing black clothes such as leather jackets and pants] and [have long black hair
to shake in concerts like them.] Also, [we both like tattoos and piercings.] Moreover, they taught me
their preferences and I like them a lot. For example, [Rock and Heavy Metal became my favorite
kind of music.] Another thing is that [rockers like to learn about new cultures and sub-cultures around
the world] So that, [they like to try new things and acquire knowledge of these experience.] Finally, I
like their amazing personalities. [Rockers always have an interesting topic to talk about] Besides of
that, [they are so relaxed and against that people thing, Rockers are peaceful.] And, the most
important thing for me is that [they are brave and always want to take risks.] In conclusion, Rockers,
as a role model, are the strongest influence in my life because we share the same interest, they are
always teaching me new things, and they have helped me to grow up as a human being.
