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1.  Write a list of achievements

                            In Elementary School, I was the president of the class.

                            I won three gold medals in rhythmic gymnastics.

                   2.  Choose one sentence


                            In Elementary School, I was the president of the class.

                   3.  Brainstorm ideas

                            Responsibilities

                            Teacher’s assistant

                            Classmates’ confidence

                            Friendly



                   4.  Organize the ideas

                          1)  I was the president of the class.

                          2)  I was the teacher’s assistant

                          3)  I had the classmates’ confidence

                          4)  I was very friendly


                   5.  General statements

                         I  was  the  president  of  the  class.  To  be  a  teacher’s  assistant.  I  had  the

                  classmates’ confidence because I was very friendly.


                   6.  Write supporting ideas for general statements

                         I was the president of the class. It was a big responsibility for me. I was very

                  exciting about that. After that I had to be teacher’s assistant. The teacher asked me

                  for some activities. I had to check for my classmates had done their homework and

                  things  like this.  Over time I was getting the classmates confidence.  They asked  me
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