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for what had we do for homework or when someone needed help to do anything and

I find the way to help them. I was very friendly all the classmates and the teachers

too. Everybody notice that. I made a lot of good friends at school. I conserved them

still now.

7. Write the first draft

When I was a child at Elementary School I was the president of the class. It

was a big responsibility for me. But despite that I was very excited. This mean that I

had to be a kind of teacher’s assistant. She asked me for some activities such as:

check for my classmates had done their homework or took notes when someone had

a bad behavior in the class. Over time I was getting the classmates confidence.

Sometimes they asked me for knew what had to do for homework or when

somebody needed help. I find the way to help them. Meanwhile I became friendlier.

My friends and my family notice that. I made a lot of good friends at school. Even

the teachers became good friends and I keep it still now.

8. Write the final draft with corrections

When I was a child at Elementary School I was the president of the class. It
was a big responsibility for me, but despite that I was very excited. First, I had to be

a kind of teacher’s assistant. She asked me for some activities such as: check my
classmates had done their homework or took notes when someone had a bad

behavior in the class. Also, I was getting the classmates’ confidence. Sometimes
they asked me for knew what had to do for homework or asked for help for someone

that needed it. Then I find the way to help them. Meanwhile I became friendlier. All

my friends and my family notice that. Finally, I made a lot of friends at school. Even

the teachers became good friends for me and I keep all these friendships still now.