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4. Write the topic sentence

 The last month I went to the Cotopaxi Volcano with my friends.

5. General statements

 We arrived at the Cotopaxi National Park
 We arrived at Cotopaxi Volcano
 We were loose

 We went to home

6. Add transitions

The last month I went to the Cotopaxi Volcano with my friends. First, we arrived

at Cotopaxi National Park. Then, we went to the Cotopaxi Volcano. After that, we

were loose into the park. Finally, we arrived at home.

7. Add details

The last month I went to the Cotopaxi Volcano with my friends. Early in the

morning, at 6 am, we took the bus to Latacunga. The travel was quickly and funny.

The landscape was beautiful and colorful. First, we arrived at Cotopaxi National Park.

The park opened at 8 am, everything there was so wonderful. Then, we went to

Cotopaxi Volcano. We walked a lot and climbed a big and monumental mountain until

arrived at the first refuge. We were tired and an old man told us that we had to drink a

hot and delicious coca tea. We played with the white and cold snow. Then, we

returned to the park. After that, we walked until we were loose. We can’t see anything

else than big trees and amazing mountains. After four hours walking we arrived at the

road and a man rescued us. His red car had comfortable and soft sits. He brought us

until Latacunga’s terminal. Finally, we took a bus to return to Ambato. We arrived at

home at 8 pm. It was a great and interesting trip.