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8.  Write your final draft


                   1 The  last  month  I  went  to  the  Cotopaxi  Volcano  with  my  friends.  Early  in  the
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               morning, at 6 am, we took the bus to Latacunga.  The travel was quickly and funny
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               also the landscape was beautiful and colorful.  First, we arrived at Cotopaxi National
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               Park  that  opened  at  8  am,  everything  there  was  so  wonderful.  Then,  we  went  to
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               Cotopaxi Volcano.  We walked a lot and climbed a big and monumental mountain to
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               arrive at the first refuge.  We were tired and an old man told us that we had to drink a
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               hot  and  delicious  coca  tea.  We  played  with  the  white  and  cold  snow.  Then,  we
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               returned  to  the  park.  After  that,  we  walked  until  we  were  loose  and  can’t  see
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               anything else than big trees and amazing  mountains.  After  four  hours walking we
               arrived at the road and a man rescued us in his red car with comfortable and soft sits.

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               12 He brought us until Latacunga’s terminal for taking a bus to return to Ambato.  We
               arrived tired and hunger at home at 8 pm but It was a great and interesting trip.
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