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have been more successful, however, if you had defined and used more declearly the key
terms that appear; for example 'plausibility' and 'romance'. You make your use of the lstter
more clear towards the end (the uncertainty kept you reading though)) but your earlier use
of both terms can be misleading. MUCH of interest here but please note my comments and
take consistent care with phrasing and referencing.
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