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B. - I can improve my cardiovascular system
II. The judo gave me a lot
A. - distract my mind.
III. It is an educational sport.
A. - It teaches me discipline
B. - Teach me protect me
STEP 4:
THE JUDO SPORT
I practice judo for three reasons. Judo is a healthy sport.I keep my ideal weight, I can
improve my cardiovascular system. The judo gave me a lot. This sport distract my mind.
It is an educational sport.Judo teaches me discipline, protect me.
FINAL DRAFT:
WHY DO I TRAIN THE JUDO SPORT?
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I practice judo for three reasons. First, judo is a healthy sport because I maintain my
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ideal weight, unnecessary calories. I can also improve my cardiovascular system, like the
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heart, and my circulation. Second, judo has a lot of fun, and it is very entertaining that it
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also distracts my mind. Finally, Judo is a sport that teaches us several important values
for our life, such as: it teaches me discipline, it teaches me to protect myself and also gives
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me the opportunity to win prizes. I can say that practicing this sport has helped me a lot
because now my concentration and physical memory are better.
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