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A. - a soldier is able to abandon what he loves for doing his duty

B. - a soldier never forgets his family

C. - a soldier always supports his return home

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The Effects of Being a Soldier

Being a soldier can have effects on the same person in three negative ways. First, the

soldier risks his life to defend the territorial integrity of his country, then [they stay awake

to avoid enemy infiltrations.] [They should not be afraid,] due to [they must infiltrate the

enemy territory.] As a result, the soldier usually has traumas after the war,[The memories

of war remain in your mind,] and it does not allow them to have a peaceful life.

Consequently, [after the war generates an aggressive and fearful soldier] in the Society.

For this reason, [soldiers generally stay away from people,] for fear of hurting them.

Finally, the soldier leaves his family to defend his country, so a soldier is able to abandon

what he loves, due to doing his duty.] However, [the soldier never forgets his family], and

[a soldier always supports his return home]. A soldier is the person with a hard, and sad

job, however being a soldier is a great honor, and demands a lot of responsibility.

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