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6. Closing sentence

In conclusion, I admire my father because he has set an example of

responsibility, love and honesty. I want to follow his footsteps and make him
feels proud of me.

7. Identify general statements, supporting statement, transitions, linkers and

closing sentence.

My role model is my father because he is responsible, lovely and honest. First,

he organizes his time in order to do all the things that he has to do during the
day. He wakes up at 5:50 and he goes to the work. When he finishes his job, he

goes to a course, so he returns home at 11:10 P.M and then, he does his
homework. Second, my father is very loving because he is always with me and

my brother when we have problems. In addition, I have to say that he always

tries to solve our problems as long as possible. When I had a bad day, he gives
me a big hug. I really love him because he has been with me in my special

moments. Finally, he is a very honest person, he always tells the truth even if it's
a bad thing. He hates the people who are liars, that is why he teaches us, to be

honest. He always says “If you tell me the truth, I will forgive you and I will

help you. In conclusion, I admire my father because he has set an example of
responsibility, love and honesty. I want to follow his footsteps and make him

feels proud of me.

Topic sentence

Controlling idea
General statements

Transitions

Explanations

Closing sentence

8. Identify the type of closing sentence

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