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9. Final draft
My role model is my father Alexi Larrea, who is a truck driver, because he is

responsibly, lovely and honest. First, my father is responsible. For example my
father organizes his time in order to do all the things that he has to do during the

day. He wakes up at 5:50 and he goes to the work. Afterward finishing his work,

he goes to a driving course. Then, he returns home at 11:10 P.M and he does his
homework. Second, my father is very loving because he is always with me and

my brother when we have problems. In addition, I have to say that my father
always tries to solve our problems as long as possible. When I had a bad day, he

gives me a big hug. I really love him because he has been with me in my special
moments. Finally, he is a very honest person. He always tells the truth even if

it's a bad thing. He hates the people whom are liars. For that reason, he teaches

us, to be honest. My father always says “If you tell me the truth, I will forgive
you and I will help you. In conclusion, my father is not a perfect person but he

tries to do his best. For all three reasons previously mentioned, my father is my
role model.

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