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Write a contrast essay about “Women´s roles in two generations”

First write a part by point outline or side by side outline.

I. There are some differences between women´s roles in the past and women´s

roles in the present.

A. In the past, women did not have the opportunity to do anything.
1) Women could not study.

2) They could not work.
3) Women had to study at home.

B. Currently, women have not the opportunity to do all the things that they
want.

1) Women can study.

2) They can work.

Draft

For many years, women had been treating like animals but all those things changed.
There are many differences between women´s roles in the past and women´s roles in the

present.

In the past women did not have the opportunity to do anything. For instance, women

could not study because it was only for men. Also they did not have the opportunity to
work in any place because it was only for men, too. In addition, women had to study at

home, so they had to cook, clean and wash for their husband and children. Men thought
that women were born to do those things, for that reason women did not have any

opportunity,

But now, it is total different. Women have the opportunity to do all the things that they
want. For example, women can study like men. They can go to the university and study

for be doctor, nurse, police women, engineer, etc. Also they can work in any work.

Currently, there are not works for women and works for men. For example, now there
are many women that work as a carpenter or taxi driver.

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