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Money is the most important source for people, because it has a lot
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advantages for people to have an excellent social class.
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I was shaking, scared to death. The “That made me feel pretty good. It No refuting evidence 3
teacher opened her book and started wouldn't take too much to top that.
calling out names alphabetically: I had almost three dollars in dimes
"Helene Tucker?" "My Daddy said and quarters in my pocket. I stuck
he'd give two dollars and fifty my hand in my pocket and held on
cents." "That's very nice, Helene. to the money, waiting for her to
Very, very nice indeed." call my name. But the teacher
closed her book after she called
everybody else in the class.”
(Teacher)
(Gregory)
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In this part of the essay we can Money is the most important Not comment 3
notice that money is important for thing in this case. However,
being appreciated for people. But,
I think that it is not correct, Gregory has enough money but,
specially from a teacher who he is not important, so money
teaches values to others.
doesn’t matter in life.