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Money is the most important source for people, because it has a lot
                     Counterclaim
                                       advantages for people to have an excellent social class.






                            Refuting Evidence                 Refuting Evidence                 Refuting Evidence

                  I was shaking, scared to death. The   “That made me feel pretty good. It   No refuting evidence 3
                  teacher opened her book and started   wouldn't take too much to top that.
                  calling out names alphabetically:   I had almost three dollars in dimes
                  "Helene Tucker?" "My Daddy said    and quarters in my pocket. I stuck
                  he'd give two dollars and fifty    my hand in my pocket and held on
                  cents." "That's very nice, Helene.   to the money, waiting for her to
                  Very, very nice indeed."           call my name. But the teacher
                                                     closed her book after she called
                                                     everybody else in the class.”
                  (Teacher)
                                                      (Gregory)













                  Commentary                         Commentary                        Commentary

                  In  this  part  of  the  essay  we  can   Money  is  the  most  important   Not comment 3
                  notice that money is important for   thing  in  this  case.  However,
                  being appreciated for people. But,
                  I  think  that  it  is  not  correct,  Gregory has enough money but,
                  specially  from  a  teacher  who   he  is  not  important,  so  money
                  teaches values to others.
                                                     doesn’t matter in life.
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