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Correction

Writing II
Jocelin Sánchez
4th “A”
Write a three level paragraph about a kind of a role model chosen by a social
group or culture (150 words) (Correction)
Follow the steps
1. Brainstorming

2. Draft a topic sentence
3. Make an outline (cluster or lineal)
4. First draft (Identifies topic sentence/General statement/Concluding
sentence)
5. Final draft (Identified improved topic sentence/Add transitions,

conjunctions/Improved general statements/Details/Improved concluding
sentence)

Brainstorming
Mahatma Gandhi
• Followed by peaceful people
• Peaceful ideals and interest

• Solve problems without violence
• Want India be a better society

Topic sentence
Mahatma Gandhi was an important role model in India for his peaceful
ideals, how he solves problems without violence and he desire to want India
be a better society.

Outline
Ts: Mahatma Gandhi was an important role around the world for his peaceful
ideals, the way he solves problems without violence, and he desire to want
India to be an independent and better society.
1. Peacefulness
a. Never use violence

b. Never kill
2. Intelligence
a. Do peaceful protest
b. Use arguments against guns

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