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Write a division essay about: Tell what your culture or ethnic

identity is. Identify and describe three or four aspects of your culture
or ethnic identity. Follow the writing steps suggested in your
students book.

• In your essay identify:
1. The parts of the introduction. (The hook, the additional

sentence, the thesis statement)
2. Body paragraphs. (Topic sentence, details, transitions)

3. Conclusion. (Type)

Step 1:
I can describe myself as a Latin, atheist, and feminist women.

Step 2:
Latin: stereotype from foreign people, see as a non-serious person.
Atheist: different religion from my family, don’t be respected.

Feminist: living in a machist society, be accosed.
Step 3:
TS: I can describe myself as a Latin, atheist, and feminist women.

1. I’m Latin. I was born on Ambato, Ecuador.
a. Many people think I’m Mexican.
b. Foreign think Latin people always go to parties.

2. I’m an atheist person.
a. My family is catholic.

b. I saw many people in Internet whose don’t respect my
opinion.

3. I consider myself as a non-modern feminist.
a. I live in a machist society and learn a lot of things.

b. Always be harassed in the street.

Step 4
I can describe myself as a Latin, atheist, and feminist women.
I’m Latin, I was born on Ambato, Ecuador. A wonderful city that

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