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Some people would argue if the education would be free many colleges and
universities would open up to a greater number of students, [but in Santo Domingo province
this isn’t the case. Although education isn’t free now, this in no way means people are
prohibited from entering higher education]. Moreover, [students can already receive student
loans to pay for tuition and maintenance]. [There are no barriers to students that want to enter
higher education even without a free tuition system]. [Therefore, with the current student
loan system, lenders are far more forgiving and the repayments are much lower than a
conventional loan]. [The system already allows students to climb up the career ladder before
they start to pay back significant amounts].
As a conclusion, many people do not even believe that education is free in the future.
Education free could provide equality to all people in all the world. Allowing everyone an
equal opportunity to go to college and make something of themselves. Education free would
provide a way for poorer families to break free to have access to study. We have the
opportunity to change our future on a daily basis, everything is possible if we work hard
every day so that our goals and dreams can be fulfilled.
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Type of Details: Cause-Effect Reasoning / Comparison / Facts
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Type of Conclusion: Recommendation
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