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Some  people  would  argue  if  the  education  would  be  free  many  colleges  and

                  universities would open up to a greater number of students, [but in Santo Domingo province
                  this  isn’t  the  case.  Although  education  isn’t  free  now,  this  in  no  way  means  people  are

                  prohibited from entering higher education]. Moreover, [students can already receive student
                  loans to pay for tuition and maintenance]. [There are no barriers to students that want to enter

                  higher education even without a free tuition system]. [Therefore, with the current student
                  loan  system,  lenders  are  far  more  forgiving  and  the  repayments  are  much  lower  than  a

                  conventional loan]. [The system already allows students to climb up the career ladder before

                  they start to pay back significant amounts].




                         As a conclusion, many people do not even believe that education is free in the future.
                  Education free could provide equality to all people in all the world. Allowing everyone an

                  equal opportunity to go to college and make something of themselves. Education free would
                  provide  a  way  for  poorer  families  to  break  free  to  have  access  to  study.  We  have  the

                  opportunity to change our future on a daily basis, everything is possible if we work hard

                  every day so that our goals and dreams can be fulfilled.






                  Introduction strategy: Background

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                  Type of Details:            Cause-Effect Reasoning / Comparison / Facts

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                  Type of Conclusion:         Recommendation


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