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Instruction
Write a three level paragraph about a social group or culture. (150 words)

Follow the steps:
Step1: Brainstorming
Step 2: Draft a topic sentence.
Step 3: Make an Outline (Cluster or linear)
Step 4: First Draft (Identified topic sentence_____/ General statements ______/concluding
sentence ___)
Step 5: Final Draft (Identified improved topic sentence_____/ Add transitions,
conjunctions/ Improved General statements ______/ Details [ ]/ Improved Concluding
sentence ___)

Step 1: Brainstorming
- Social group called Lovatics
- Role Model: Demi Lovato
- Voice: Vocal range
- Demi’s charity
- Leave the drugs at the rehabilitation center

Step 2: Draft a Topic sentence
Demi Lovato is considered for the social group called lovatics as a role model because of
her vocal range, her generosity and her experience being a drugs survivor.

Step 3: Make an Outline
Topic: Demi Lovato is the lovatics’ role model.
1) Range of voice.
a) Her vocal range is until the note E7.
b) Her voice is admired for many big singers.

2) Demi’s Generosity.
a) Help people in Africa.
b) Help people with Anorexia.

3) Experience leaving the drugs.
a) She had a rehabilitation therapy.
b) Wrote songs to stay strong.

Step 4: First Draft

Demi Lovato is considered for the social group called lovatics as a role model for several

reasons. They admire her range of voice, her generosity and her experience leaving the drugs.

First, Demi Lovato had a big range of voice that is admired for her fans because her

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