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highest note is E7. Also, a lot of singers such as Adele and Kelly Clarkson wanted to sing

with her because of her incredible voice. Second, Demi likes to help others. She gives to

Africa a lot of money every year. Demi Lovato also gives money for different centers of

rehabilitation. Finally, people admire her because of the message that she gives them when

she leave the drugs. She was in rehabilitation around two months in England. There she wrote

songs for her lovatics. These songs help her to stay strong. To conclude, Demi is a role model

for the lovatics because of her talent, her generosity, and her motivational message.

Step 5: Final Draft

Demi Lovato is considered for the social group called lovatics as a role model for several

reasons. They admire her vocal range, her generosity and her experience leaving the drugs.

First, Demi Lovato is a good singer with an incredible vocal range. [It is admired for her fans

because of her highest record that goes until the note E7. Also, a lot of singers such as Adele

and Kelly Clarkson want to sing with her because of her wonderful voice.] Second, Demi

really likes to help others. [She usually donates to Africa a lot of money every year. In

addition, she helps a lot of centers of Anorexia’s rehabilitation.] Finally, people admire her

because of the message that she gives being a drugs survivor. [Well, Demi Lovato was in

rehabilitation around two months in 2012 in England. There she wrote songs for her and her

lovatics. These songs help her to stay strong.] To conclude, Demi Lovato is a role model for

the lovatics because of her talent, her generosity, and her motivational message.

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