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REVISE AND EDIT Review your draft.

In this step, you have a chance to review and improve your draft. Read your poem

aloud to a partner. Ask for feedback on the language you used and the feelings you
expressed. Use these questions to help you focus on ways to improve your poem.

PURPOSE/ ORGANIZATION EVIDENCE LANGUAGE/ CONVENTIONS
FOCUS VOCABULARY

Does my poem Does my poem Did I support my Did I use sensory Have I spelled all
tell a story about have a clear ideas with details words and words correctly?
adjusting to a beginning, or examples from figurative
new home? middle, and the texts? language?
ending?
Does the poem Did I use
leave readers Are the lines concrete words
with a thought- organized into and vivid
provoking stanzas, with a language?
message? new stanza for
each event?

PUBLISH Share your work.

Create a Finished Copy. Use your best cursive handwriting to create a final copy of
your narrative poem. You may want to include illustrations or photos. Consider these

options for sharing your poem:

1 Bind your poem together with those of your classmates in a class poetry
anthology.

2 Make an audio recording of your poem and create a podcast.

3 Perform a dramatic reading of your poem for your class or a small group.

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