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Just as short, incomplete sentences can be problematic, lengthy sentences can be

               problematic too. Sentences with two or more independent clauses that have been
               incorrectly combined are known as
               Here are some common and frequent sentence errors that lead us to write run-on
               sentences:


                  A run-on sentence created by two complete sentences combined into one without any
                  punctuation.

                  A run-on sentence created by two complete sentences separated only by a single
                  coma.
                                         Personality  has  great  influence  on  a  person’s  success  in
                  Fused sentence         learning  a  foreign  language  the  most  important  one  is
                                         perseverance.

                                         We  managed  to  conduct  the  experiment  by  the  funding  of
                  Comma splice           University of Oregon, they particularly share the interest of our
                                         research area.


               Can you think of way(s) to correct those errors?
               Run-on sentences can be corrected with at least three ways; as the following:



                                        Personality  has  great  influence  on  a  person’s  success  in
                 Run-on sentence        learning a foreign language the most important is perseverance.

                                        Personality  has  great  influence  on  a  person’s  success  in
                                        learning  a  foreign  language.  The  most  important  one  is

                                        perseverance.
                 Complete sentence      OR
                                        Personality  has  great  influence  on  a  person’s  success  in
                                        learning  a  foreign  language;  the  most  important  one  is
                                        perseverance.


                         Adding a period will easily correct the run-on sentence by creating two separate
                         sentences.
                         Using a semicolon between the two complete sentences will also correct the
                         error. A semicolon allows you to keep the two closely related together in one
                         sentence. When you use semicolon, it is important to note that both parts of
                         the sentence are independent clause.





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