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ACTIVITY 3:

CONSTRUCTING MIDDLE/BODY PARAGRAPHS

Now some ideas regarding the disadvantages of:

…permission given to open franchise business.

Topic Sentence: On the other hand, franchise store has come in for a lot of criticism.

Idea 1: The franchisee may even leak the franchisor’s secrets to rivals.

Idea 2: He always has to pay some royalty to the franchisor

Idea 3: …

You might not need all the ideas that you come up with, especially if they take many

words to explain and you have good examples to describe. Or you might be able to

combine two ideas into one broader (more general) idea.