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     Story


     When writing a story,
     •  spend a few minutes thinking about how you want your story to develop and make notes.
     •  set the scene in the first paragraph and create a strong atmosphere.
     •  use narrative tenses (past tenses) to describe events better.
     •  use linking words to make your sentences flow.
     •  make sure you give your story an interesting ending.
     •  remember to talk about how the people felt in the end.

       Plan
       Paragraph 1
       Set the scene and introduce the main characters. Make the introduction sound interesting or
       dramatic. Use the sentence you are given in the task if necessary.
       It was a cold,  dark evening. /  John was very scared.

       Paragraph 2
       Give background information about the characters and what is going on.
       Maddy and Sally m et at their dance class a year ago.

       Paragraph 3
       Describe the main events in order.
       A t firs t,... /  Then,  ... /  The moment th a t... /  Meanwhile,  ...

       Paragraph 4
       Introduce a twist in the story (if appropriate).
       That was when ... /  Soon after th a t... /  Suddenly,  ... /  Just then,  ... /  As soon as ...

       Paragraph 5
       Bring the story to an end.
       Eventually,... / We never went to the castle again. /  Sally knew it would never happen again.


     Story checklist
     •  Have you followed the plan?
     •  Have you used grammatically correct forms?
     •  Have you checked for spelling and punctuation mistakes?
     •  Have you made your story interesting to the reader?
     •  Is the storyline clear and coherent?
     •  Have you used     a range of tenses, direct speech and   dramatic sentences?
     •  Have you used     appropriate adjectives, adverbs and   expressions to give life to your story?   Q
     •  Have you used     linking words and time expressions?
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