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No. Topic Question or response Comment Labels and
actions
12 3 4 5
Q
Can you tell me the names of the Permission phrase by the Husband
2 persons that travelled with you? interviewer … a bad approach Aiden
Reagan
My husband, Michael Leigh, Refers to her sons and husband Azaria
my six year old son Aiden Leigh as ‘my’ Daughter
and my four year old son Reagan Son
Michael and my nine week old My
daughter Azaria Chantel Loren
CHAMBERLAIN. We
Caravan
Q Can you tell me how you made
that trip? Husband
The baby
3 In a yellow Holden hatch back V8 I
Torane Her

Q Could you just outline the trip after
departing Mount Isa and arriving
at Ayres Rock?

4 We went from Mount Isa to Devils We= entire family

Marbles, we camped the night, ⇒ = missing pronoun

Devils Marbles ⇒to Alice Springs, normally an indication of lack of

⇒camped at Heavy Tree Gap commitment

Caravan Park. We just looked

around Alice Springs and camped

at the same place the next night.

⇒To caravan park at Ayres Rock.

Q What time did you arrive at Ayres
Rock?

5 Well a short time after sunset
maybe an hour.

Q Could you tell me what occurred Note question 25 below and her

after you arrived at Ayres Rock? broken watch strap

6 We registered at the rangers office, We= entire family

then drove around looking for a See site map … not a desirable

camping site, it was crowded, only area and adjacent to dingo runs

two spots available. We chose the = WHY did they do this? The area

back one where it was quieter near was covered in dingo tracks

the sand hills.