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No. Topic Question or response Comment Labels and
actions

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24 Between one thirty and two,
possibly he timed himself and
would know the exact time.

25 ⇑ My watch band broke on the way Irrelevant information about Watch

Back down to the car broken watch strap. Why was this

significant to her? The broken

strap was kept in the glove

compartment of the car. Could it

have been broken in an attack on

Azaria?

Q What did you do while your
husband and the two boys
climbed the Ayres Rock?

26 There was several bus tours Extended prologue

climbing the rock and I, the baby Hanging sentence ‘and I, the’

was awake, and I sat on one of Note ‘I’ not ‘we’

the stools at the bottom watching Baby was never included in ‘we’

them climb along with an elderly group with her mother

couple that were eating their Poor relationship?

lunch and a family of four who had

binoculars and were reporting the

progress of my husband and boys.

27 I stayed there until they came back. Not ‘we’ to include Azaria We

She was alone with the baby for

around 2 hours

28 ⇑ We left the area at around four, Out of sequence ‘after’ Backtrack

Back after taking three pictures of the Why specifically ‘three’ pictures? Is

baby standing on the rock beside it significant?

Chicken Rock. The baby looks older than 10

weeks. In other photographs

Azaria appears to have dark hair

Q What area do you call Chicken
Rock?

29 It’s on the maps too, its the end
of the rocky section of rock which
overlays the rock at the base of the
climb.

Q What did you do after you left the
area of the climb?