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44 We went back to take another From this it appears that she did

photograph of a rock drawing he remember that Michael walked

missed. outside the cave. If Michael had

been with them on the walk back

through the cave he would have

taken the missing photograph at

that time. The use of the pronoun

‘we’ may be misleading.

Michael appears to have gone

back by himself, hence the delay in

catching them up

45 The children and I walked slowly Michael = away –

back to the car, Michael caught us If they walked slowly back

up, we left just before the bus tour Michael must have stayed behind

party got back to the bus. or walked even more slowly

46 ⇑ We went straight back to our tent, Note about bathing the baby is
Back I bathed the children, the baby slightly out of sequence
first and then the two boys, it was
just on sunset,

47 My husband told me to hurry or My husband = told –
we would miss the photography. Hanging sentence…
We came straight from the shower
block to the car and drove out to
sunset strip where we parked near
another young couple who were
also photographing, we both, they
also had a wide angled lens and so
we were closer to the rock than any
of the buses or other cars.

48 I fed the baby while my husband Husband = away Fed
photographed. The boys stayed in
the car too in order to stay clean.
Reagan went to sleep. I got out
of the car and spoke to the other
young couple. We wanted to stay
for the after glow, there didn’t
seem to be one that night.

49 The buses started leaving and Is this a justification for leaving

made clouds of dust so we packed early?. ‘Started’ = because not all

up and went straight back to the had left

camp