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No. Topic Question or response Comment Labels and
actions

12 3 45

Q What occurred after your husband
arrived?

38 We all told him the dingo had In Q30 the ‘husband’ became

been there, he was disappointed ‘Michael’ – when he took some

he missed it to photograph. The photographs of the cave drawings

other folks left.

39 The bus tour had caught up to Michael = stays behind

us and had climbed to what I – photographing but took some

believe is called the cut throat. photographs of us +++

The children and I followed them

up, while Michael photographed

some of the cave drawings. He

took some photographs of us

along with the other people on the

rock, then came up too.

40 ⇑ Stop for a minute. A couple of Out of sequence … to prove Azaria Backtrack
Back young people on the bus tour was alive?
came up and spoke to me, asked Spoke to ‘me’ was Michael not
me how old the baby was and with her?
what her name was.

41 They told me a little of the Never asked to explain what this
aboriginal legend of the fertility was
cave and cut throat.

42 My husband was very tired and Husband = very tired –

wanted to go straight home. We She was agreeable to going home

decided not to walk on to the Did not go to the springs

springs.

43 The children and I went back Children = 2 boys plus baby?

through the cave, I can’t Michael = away –

remember whether Michael did Strange not to remember

nor not, I think he went around the Why is this information relevant:

part on the outside. We met near unwanted detail?

the front entrance.