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No. Topic Question or response Comment Labels and
actions

12 3 45

Q Do you know the names of the
people that you spoke to out at
Sunset strip?

50 They may have said their Christian ‘She compares her relationship

names but I can’t remember, I with her husband, the

wondered if they were on their photographer, to the relationship

honeymoon, because she was between another couple.

the photographer and he was Actually the subject is saying

extremely patient, they were in a something like: “We were not on

four wheel drive cream and bone our honeymoon because he (my

long wheel base I think. husband) was the photographer

and I was extremely impatient”.

Q Can you tell me what occurred
after you returned to your camp
from sunset strip?

51 ⇑ I forgot to mention the children Out of sequence… why is this Backtrack

Back were also wearing army green relevant. She did not describe

quilted parkas. anyone else’s clothing

52 The baby had wind so I nursed her Wind is normally after a feed, but

and patted her back. she does not say the baby was fed

except at Sunset Strip

53 Aiden held the baby. Still in the car?. The baby was in
the car with Aiden and not asleep
(see 57)

54 while I lifted the sleeping Reagan ⇒ Missing pronoun
from the car ⇒took (off) his parker Reagan went to bed with no tea
while sleeping, placed him down
in his sleeping bag, zipped it up
and covered him with his half of
the space blanket.

55 I folded my side of it back across Hanging sentence ‘‘though not

though not folded so I had a clear folded’

track to the back of the tent and Why did she want to have a ‘clear

put my sleeping bag on top of my track to the back of the tent’. Why

husband’s. did she put her sleeping bag on

top of her husband’s. Forensic

evidence showed blood on his bag

but not hers.