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87 ⇑ We were sitting about three feet
Back apart.

88 ⇑ We were unaware that the dingo
Back was there.

89 ⇑ It was very silent and disappeared
Back quickly into the darkness with its
prey.

90 ⇑ We told them the dingoes bit and This is reverting to the

Back they endeavoured to keep their conversation on the morning

daughter away. of 17th August 1980 with the

Tasmanians

91 ⇑ She was toddling about.
Back

92 ⇑ Aiden asked me if the dingo This should have alerted her,

Back would take our baby. I told him no more than ever, to the dangers

mummy wouldn’t let him she was for Azaria

safe with us.

93 ⇑ They wouldn’t come close or in our She knew they had come close i.e.

Back tent. He was afraid of them. between their feet and what she

was telling Aiden was incorrect

94 After Aiden and Michael had Disconnect word ‘after’ indicates Backtrack

finished the bake beans and something has been left out

mushrooms. Aiden said he was tired between the time that they

started and finished eating. Aiden

does not complain that he is still

hungry

95 Michael suggested I should eat tea She only ‘said’ she wasn’t hungry
even though I said I wasn’t hungry.
I agreed.

96 CI Azaria had been asleep for some Only mention of ‘Azaria’

⇑ half hour and seemed to have got Still no feed or nappy change

Back over her wind trouble. She was Out of sequence had not

now sleeping peacefully instead of previously mentioned ‘wind

wriggling. trouble’