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No. Topic Question or response Comment Labels and
actions
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127 as I backed out the tent I called to ‘The’ dingo has got my baby and Called
Michael ‘The dingo’s got my baby’ not ‘a’ dingo
Called not ‘yelled’ again
emotionally inconsistent
This only time in the whole
transcript that she refers to the
baby as ‘my baby’ not ‘our’ baby.
Was it Michael’s baby?
128 ⇑ When I had previously yelled at ‘Calling’ is not the same as Backtrack
Back the dingo it had run out of the ‘yelling’ Not emotionally
tent across the front of the car and consistent. She must have had a
into the shadow. As I was calling to good frontal view of the dingo.
Michael I was running in a direction Its exit from the tent is out of
the dingo had gone around the sequence = suspect
front of the car.
129 Michael said ‘What’. ‘Said’ not emotionally consistent:
she had ‘yelled’ and ‘called’
130 As I reached the front corner of the Still no yelling or panic attack
car left hand corner at the time
Michael answered
131 I noticed the dingo standing Noticed is far too soft a word
motionless and slightly behind under the circumstances
the rear of the car in its shadow Of course there may have been
approximately the middle of the more than one dingo
distance between the two railings.
It had it’s back to me but at a slight
angle with its whole body visible
its head was turned slightly as if
listening
132 I did not see anything in its mouth LACK OF COMMITMENT???
133 My mind refused to accept what The normal emotional reaction at
was happening I’m glad I did not this point would be blind panic.
Again a reference to ‘mind’
134 As I appeared it ran swiftly on an Please note that after the dingo
angle to the right into the scrub disappeared the subject refers to
towards the sand hills. I did not hear her husband only as ‘Michael’.
it move the night was very quiet No more ‘my husband’.
135 I cut across the angle to where it
was heading
