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People are different in many aspects, one of them is the ethnic identity. My ethnic identity
                  has been defined by my life – experiences. I consider myself as an Ecuadorian, a Catholic

                  person and I’m a mixture of cultures.


                  STEP 5: FINAL DRAFT


                  Life – experiences define our ethnic identity. My ethnic identity has been developed during

                  my whole life and it has three main aspects. I’m Ecuadorian, I’m Catholic and I’m a mixture
                  of cultures.


                  One aspect of my identity is that I’m Ecuadorian. First, people around the world known us

                  like kind people. It’s because we have diversity of people. Also, there are many tourists that

                  visit our country every day, so, we have learnt how to treat people in a good way. Second,
                  we are superstitious people. Since I was a child, I have heard a lot of legends and tales from

                  my grandparents. For this reason I believe in those things, despite I haven’t seen anything.


                  Another aspect is that I’m Catholic. Since I was a baby my family has taught me things
                  related to God. In addition, I have learnt important values. For example, the importance to

                  share with others and that it’s important to love people.


                  Another important aspect of my ethnic identity is that I’m a mixture of different cultures.

                  First, I have lived in 11 different houses, in 4 different provinces, where I had the opportunity
                  to learn about different costumes and traditions. For this reason, I have learnt different things

                  and I have copied that.


                  People are different in many aspects, one of them is the ethnic identity. My ethnic identity

                  has been defined by my life- experiences. I consider myself as an Ecuadorian, Catholic and
                  a mixture of cultures.


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                  Type of hook: Background


                  Type of conclusion: Final thought
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