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Tuition is the amount of money that someone has to pay to study. Some people think
that paying a tuition at college or university is good for students because it makes them

appreciate education and it guarantees a higher quality of education. In my opinion, college

or university students shouldn’t have to pay anything, so the tuition should be free. It gives
equal opportunities for all to enter to a university, students have a better academic

development and less students leave their studies.
First of all, tuition should be free for college or university students because it gives

equal opportunities to enter to a university. [Students don’t have to worry about paying a

tuition so that they can enter. In addition, education is for all people. There are less
discrimination. However, some people think paying a tuition guarantees a higher quality of

education.]
Another reason to have a tuition free is that students would have a better academic

development. [For example, a student that just focuses his attention on university and don’t
have to work will be a better student. However, people said that if students have to pay a

tuition, they appreciate more their studies. But this is obviously wrong, because students can

be distracted by their jobs.]
Finally, less students leave their studies. [It’s due to less economic problems. Students

just have to invest money in their studies. In addition, they have just to study hard and this is
what really matters.]

In conclusion, having the right to a tuition free should be for every person who wants
to study. It is better for some reasons. . It gives equal opportunities for all to enter to a

university, students have a better academic development and less students leave their studies.

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