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odometer. Readers are more likely to accept advice from those who
have some experience or expertise in a particular area.

Example of a Historical Introduction to Establish Expertise

Through my parents’ divorces and subsequent remarriages, I have

acquired one stepfather, two stepmothers, three sets of step-

grandparents, three stepsisters, two stepbrothers, and assorted step-

aunts, step-uncles, and step-cousins. I speak with the voice of
experience when I say that getting along with stepfamilies requires

compromise, respect of others’ privacy, and willingness to share.

Historical Introduction to Set the Stage

Another reason to use a historical introduction is to give the

background that sets the stage for your essay. Information the reader
needs in order to understand the rest of the essay should be placed in

the introduction. If you write about neighbors who donated food,

clothing, and money to your family, don’t wait until the last paragraph

to tell about the house fire that prompted their generosity. Establish

background information in the introduction.

Example of a Historical Introduction to Set the Stage

My dad was a car enthusiast and, almost from the time I could walk, I

followed him around on Saturdays, carrying things and being

“helpful.” He encouraged my love of cars, and when I was fourteen, he

bought me an old junker to rebuild. Restoring cars and working on

engines has brought enjoyment, won the respect of other car
enthusiasts, and helped me to earn extra income.