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The Sentence-Length Example

Sometimes, you need more than just a word or phrase to illustrate an

idea. In such cases, try giving an example in a sentence or two. The

example should be a specific, detailed illustration of the general idea
you are discussing, not just a vague restatement.

Example 1: Examples in a Sentence or Two

Idea + vague restatement: The new disc jockey on the morning

show is really obnoxious. He has an unpleasant attitude that

makes listening to his show a bad experience.

Idea + specific example: The new disc jockey on the morning
show is really obnoxious. He tries to humiliate listeners who call in,

and his jokes border on the offensive.

Example 2: Examples in a Sentence or Two

Idea + vague restatement: The new grocery store has added

whimsical touches to some of its departments. It’s enjoyable to

shop in a store that is entertaining.