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Missing-Subject Fragments











                             4        Revise missing-subject fragments.










               Fragments beginning with a joining word such as and, or, but, or then
               followed by a verb are missing-subject fragments. The subject of

               the verb is usually in a previous sentence. Connect the fragment to

               the sentence or add a subject to begin a new sentence.




                      The hurricane changed course and seemed to falter. But

                    gathered strength again before it hit the coast.



                       The hurricane changed course and seemed to falter but

                    gathered strength again before it hit the coast.




                       The hurricane changed course and seemed to falter. But it

                    gathered strength again before it hit the coast.



                      Woodrow held up his prize fish and posed for the camera. Then

                    fell off the end of the fishing pier.
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