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4.  On New Year’s Eve, Alexandra vowed to give up all sweets.

                        Especially chocolate.



                    5.  If everyone would cooperate, it would be easy to solve some of

                        the community’s problems. For example, litter on public streets.






                    Punctuation Pointer



                    Usually, you can connect fragments beginning with such as,

                    including, not, especially, and in spite of with a comma.

                    Fragments beginning with except, unless, without, and like are
                    ordinarily connected without punctuation.



                    A fragment beginning with for example or for instance may be

                    attached with a comma if it immediately follows the idea it
                    illustrates: The chef enjoyed cooking with beans, for

                    example, lima beans, garbanzo beans, and kidney beans. If

                    the idea that the example illustrates is expressed earlier in the

                    sentence, place the example in a new sentence: Beans are

                    the specialty of the house at Rizzoli’s Restaurant. For
                    example, the chef makes delicious dishes from lima beans,

                    garbanzo beans, and kidney beans.
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