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Example and Exception



               Fragments












                             5        Correct example and exception fragments.









               Fragments often occur when a writer decides to add an example or

               note an exception. Example fragments often begin with such as,

               including, like, for example, or for instance. Exception fragments often

               begin with not, except, unless, without, or in spite of. To fix the

               fragment, connect it to the sentence with which it logically belongs. If
               the fragment begins with for example or for instance, it is often best to

               make the fragment into an independent sentence.




                      Hollis becomes nervous in high-pressure situations. Such as

                    exams and interviews.



                       Hollis becomes nervous in high-pressure situations, such as

                    exams and interviews.




                      Lindsay is trying to put herself through college. Without any help

                    from her parents.
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