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               other members of the audience.  It’s important to me that I can

               watch the movie uninterrupted by annoying whispers, as an avid film

               fan.



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               Editing Exercise 3  Verb Shifts,




               Parallel Structure, and Dangling or




               Misplaced Modifiers





               Underline the misplaced and dangling modifiers and parallel structure

               errors and correct them in the answer lines that follow the paragraph.





                 3 shifts in tense                         1 misplaced modifier
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