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All my childhood was full of experiences with my cousin. I admired my cousin Junior

                  because of his sense of humor, talent and kindness I hoped to be like him.
                   10. Identify the type of closing sentence.


                  That is a closing sentence that refers back to the controlling idea/major supporting points

                  with some word forms or synonyms.
                   11. Final draft.


                                               My cousin Junior was my role model


                             When I was a child my role model was my cousin Junior, because he was funny, a

                      people person and talented. First, he was funny. He had a natural humor to say jokes.

                      Also, it may be because he used to watch many TV shows. So, my cousin used to imitate
                      the  characters  of  TV  series  such  as;  “Vivos”,  “Cronica  Roja”  or  anime  like  “Super

                      Campeones”. For example, when we were playing soccer, he kicked the ball so hard that

                      it broke a window, my mom screamed and, we ran away laughing. Another day, Junior
                      was acting like a drunk, then her mom hit him with a ruler because she thought, he was

                      really drunk, that was so funny. Second, my cousin was a real people person. He used to
                      make  friends  saying  a  joke,  although  he  sometimes  didn’t  stop  talking  about  boring

                      topics. Junior used to say “The life is like candies, ice cream, avocado, banana, pizza and
                      chocolate  mixed  in  an  iron,  because  it  seems  trash  but,  when  you  try  it  everything

                      changes”, everyone laughed, and then he did new friends. Besides, my cousin used to talk

                      with adults during hours, because he was intelligent. Finally, Junior was talented. My
                      cousin was talented, because he practiced soccer during hours trying to do the best tricks,

                      and he practiced on the guitar playing the most difficult songs. As a result, he did some
                      tricks with the ball and scored two or three goals in a match. What’s more, my cousin

                      dedicated romantic songs to the girls and they fell in love with him, although he sang
                      badly. All my childhood was full of experiences with my cousin. I admired my cousin

                      Junior because of his sense of humor, talent and kindness I hoped to be like him.











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