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STEP 4. MAKE AN OUTLINE
                      I.     One of the reasons for people to migrate is because of social aspects.
                             A.  People try to find a better education

                             B.  Some people think they will find love abroad or they already have some
                                they love far away.

                             C.  Because sometimes people can be on risk in their native country so that,

                                they look for another place.
                      II.    Another reason is economical aspects.

                             A.  People seek for more job opportunities
                             B.  In other countries, salaries are higher

                             C.  As people earn more money, they are able to open a business.



                  STEP 5. FINAL DRAFT


                         Migration can be defined as the movement of people from a place to another.

                  Many aspects can be involved to take the huge decision of migrate. Although there are
                  plenty aspects to consider when talking about migration, I think these can be divided into

                  social and economic reasons.


                         First, it is well know there are social reasons for people to migrate. One of these

                  social aspects is education. In view of many students have found out that studying abroad
                  is much more beneficial, they tend to prefer to study abroad. Therefore, they will get a

                  more recognized degree. Another social  aspect is  relationships.  Due to  long distance
                  relationships  or  because  people  want  to  find  someone  else,  they  decide  to  travel  for

                  finding  its  true  love.  In  addition,  looking  for  a  safer  place  is  a  final  social  aspect.

                  Sometimes, people are on a risk living in their native countries because of war or other
                  things, so they need to move out. One clear example of this is Venezuela. The corruption

                  and violence in there have caused many Venezuelan people to leave their country.


                         Besides social aspects, there are also economic reasons for people to migrate in

                  today’s world. People have noticed there are more job opportunities abroad. Due that,
                  they travel to other countries just for working. Thus, they can work on high-paid jobs as

                  well. The majority of migrants  look  for countries  with  well-paid  jobs.  For example,
                  Mexicans work as gardeners in USA, but their salary is much higher than in their country.


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