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STEP 4. MAKE AN OUTLINE
I. One of the reasons for people to migrate is because of social aspects.
A. People try to find a better education
B. Some people think they will find love abroad or they already have some
they love far away.
C. Because sometimes people can be on risk in their native country so that,
they look for another place.
II. Another reason is economical aspects.
A. People seek for more job opportunities
B. In other countries, salaries are higher
C. As people earn more money, they are able to open a business.
STEP 5. FINAL DRAFT
Migration can be defined as the movement of people from a place to another.
Many aspects can be involved to take the huge decision of migrate. Although there are
plenty aspects to consider when talking about migration, I think these can be divided into
social and economic reasons.
First, it is well know there are social reasons for people to migrate. One of these
social aspects is education. In view of many students have found out that studying abroad
is much more beneficial, they tend to prefer to study abroad. Therefore, they will get a
more recognized degree. Another social aspect is relationships. Due to long distance
relationships or because people want to find someone else, they decide to travel for
finding its true love. In addition, looking for a safer place is a final social aspect.
Sometimes, people are on a risk living in their native countries because of war or other
things, so they need to move out. One clear example of this is Venezuela. The corruption
and violence in there have caused many Venezuelan people to leave their country.
Besides social aspects, there are also economic reasons for people to migrate in
today’s world. People have noticed there are more job opportunities abroad. Due that,
they travel to other countries just for working. Thus, they can work on high-paid jobs as
well. The majority of migrants look for countries with well-paid jobs. For example,
Mexicans work as gardeners in USA, but their salary is much higher than in their country.
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